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After what seemed like a whole day, I finally finished my first human vector. I'm extremely proud enough to start a group orgy. I hated HATED HATED HATED doing the hair, so that's why it looks ridiculously weird. I know the background is kind of too much but it looked really empty so yeah, I'll also submit a nonbackgroundless ish..thingy ish.

So Nestor, critic you vector freak.

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FINALLY!!!! OMFG! the face, the nose, the neck, the hair without the outlines on it!!! Excellente!!!Notice my lame attempt at Spanish there. im so blown away that i start complimenting in Spanish. hehehe. first favorites, bitch!

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It's thanks to your teachings, Master Tulogan.
:iconflipflow89:
T-U-L-A-G-A-N!!!! omfg!!!! I HATE YOU!

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I'm sorry, Tulagon*
:iconflipflow89:
ur an idiot.

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:iconmrhouse:
Well this is a very good change from your other vectors' quality. You've managed the likeness to Angelina while keeping it very simple; she looks great.

Now unto the crits:

The left eye (her right) looks really weird, probably because the shadow under it is badly done.

The neck area is rendered differently than the face. It's more abstract and loose and it doesn't work that well with her face. But I think I like the rendering better that way.

I'm really not sure about the background overlapping with her. I'm also very not sure about the background. The blue stripes are not bad, but they should have been curvy and smooth.

The background kind of ruins it, but it's still MUCH better than every other vector you've done. Like, A LOT better.



But like I said to that other guy in that other thread, at one point you should stop doing vectors over pictures like that. It's probably great for practice, but you'll have to agree it's not very original, and it doesn't help you develop your own style.
:iconshadowseek:
lol I read it like "Angel in a wall" XD

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Way better than my vector art.

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